Ray,
Hans - What method did you use on the underbody (first layer)? Did you stretch the material first to get it so thin? I like the way the light reflects off the hook and back through the body material.
Keep thread at thorax. Just the plastic covering rest of hook - single flat layer to bend, then cord the ribbon for the rib back up to thorax.
Nice hook choice (silver color works nicely for all of these flies).
Must be the bright light on the fly - the hook is bronze, not silver.
If you add a green one to the set you will have a nice Snipe rainbow.
Uh.... there is a green one in the set
Cheers,
Hans W