Kelly, that is "ON THE MONEY"..........GREAT fishin' fly and worthy of framing for that matter.

Before you fish it ("i" would), take my thumb and first finger and just force all that hackle forward/fluff it outward some. You can't hurt it and you can't mess it up...........that fly is a stone cold fish catcher no matter if you do or don't do what i'm suggesting. But to my eye, it just looks like a tiny crease/bit of memory, put in to those fibers up near the head sure couldn't hurt. What i'm thinkin' is "action." The Jazz GIANT Ahmad Jamal (when in rehearsal/during sound checks), uses one word over and over again to get his message across....."Pulse." All the best of luck fishin' it. Great fly.....

OH! do up another version wiff a gold rib too.....
Kelly, for the Olive version.....leave the head Olive as well.....Damsels don't have black heads.....you can add burnt mono eyes or bead chain if you like. i'd go with burnt mono.....cause you can color them whatever you like. Bead chain if your lookin' to flip the hook up.
